My favorite place is Mount Rainier. This mountain is so mysterious and beautiful.I always have a good experience when I go there. The summer is when I like traveling to this magnificent place. Almost every year in the past I went there, because I love to walk on the trails during the day. Also to see the wild animals, the flowers and have the opportunity to watch how the snow is melting away from the hills of the mountain.
This place helps me to relax and clear my mind; during the night I can go out and see the stars and hear the different sounds of the wildlife.
So this is way this mountain is my favorite place to be, because it reminds me of my little town in Mexico where I was born.
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Hello Sergio,
ReplyDeleteI'm Victoria in RTC writing's class. I do part of week # 1's assignment from Liz.
I would make two comments
1) I like the songs on your play list, particularly the French one "Les Yeux Ouverts".
2) On your post Mount Rainer I have some suggestion for the last two paragraphs
Your: during the night I can go out and see
Me: during the night I can go out to see
Your:
So is way this mountain is my favorite place to be, because is remain me my little town in Mexico when I was born.
Me: This Mountain is my favorite place to be, because it reminds me the little town in Mexico where I was born.
To Liz, Correct me if I'm wrong
See you on Friday in class